HUMAN LONGING – THE MOST POWERFUL EMOTION To “long for” something – to feel a strong desire for an object or person. To ache for, hunger or lust for, to pine or yearn for someone or something just out of reach. There’s no deeper or more powerful emotion in literature, or in life, for that…
RADICAL PLOT REVERSALS – Another time-honored way of building suspense and creating tension is to create radical reversals for your characters. Reversals that jar the reader, create confusion, uncertainty, and doubt. SELF-INFLICTED REVERSALS – A reversal could be self-inflicted. For example, a recovering alcoholic with decades of sobriety could fall off the wagon. An ex-gang…
WITHHOLDING- Withholding is one of the simplest and most effective ways to create tension and build suspense. Remember Christmas as a child? Did you ever pick up a gift-wrapped box with your name on it days before Christmas and shake it in an effort to determine its contents? Though you were outwardly chafed, there was…
Building Suspense and Tension – Part One The most important thing you can do as a writer of fiction is make the reader want to turn the page. In fact, there is no other job more important to a writer. If the reader doesn’t care what happens next in your story, then you’ve failed as…
At its most fundamental level, a synopsis answers the question: What is this book about? A synopsis should cover (in abbreviated form) all the major points of your book in sequential order from beginning to end. In a work of fiction, you’ll want to cover all the main characters and plot points, including the end….
If you’re a writer, YOU do. Every story needs a conflict at the center of it. If plot is the fundamental building block of a story, then conflict is the fundamental building block of plot. No conflict, no plot. No plot, no story. Because if everyone in your story already has everything they need, if…
IN THE BEGINNING WAS THE BLURB WRITING A BLURB IS NOT EASY: Anyone who thinks writing a blurb is easy, has probably never written a good blurb. The blurb I speak of here is the kind that’s found on the back of a novel – a short paragraph briefly encapsulating a book’s essence, it’s heart…
For the purposes of this blog, a blurb is the brief description of a book’s contents found on the book’s back cover, written with the intent of tantalizing the reader and selling the book. THE IMPORTANCE OF A GOOD BLURB: Just as a prospective editor or agent reads the first page of your novel and…
The most important part of any story is the characters. Indeed, the characters ARE the story. If you don’t have believable characters, you don’t have a story – no matter how good the rest of the writing may be. When creating fun and realistic characters, the thing you want most is for your characters to…
The First Fifty – Crucial – Pages of Your Book The first fifty pages of your book are crucial for setting the hook in your readers. Something has to happen. Something exciting, or intriguing, or you risk losing your reader’s interest. Limit Backstory – It’s always tempting in the beginning to fill the reader in…
Benefits and Drawbacks of Each POV in Your MS As a beginning writer who chose to write my first book in first-person narrative, I discovered the drawbacks of such an approach the hard way. Halfway through the book, I started all over in third-person – something I wouldn’t recommend. Briefly, Point of View – when…
Are You Overwhelming Your Readers? Have you ever run across a prologue like this: (usually in sci-fi books) Captain Briggs took the helm and began shouting orders. “Ensign, optimize the traspositional filtration valves to ignite the gravitational destabilizers.” “I can’t do that,” Ensign Scott replied. “If I optimize the filtration valve, the axomital diffusionators will…
